13 years earlier
Jackie Winthers walked with her husband, Ness, along the streets of the Montressor spaceport. She heard a small cry come from the bundle she was holding, and she lifted some of the blankets back, shushing the infant inside. Hush, Skylyn, she murmured, rocking her child. Ness looked at her. Is she alright?
Yes, just tired and hungry. Its good that she cries- it means shes healthy.
Good. Ness put an arm around Jackies shoulders and hurried along, going slow for his wife. Were almost there, this is the street. Ness counted the houses they passed, then stopped in front of one that was larger than the others. He led his wife and child up the steps and knocked on the door. They waited for a minute, then the door opened a crack. An older woman peered out, squinting from bad eyesight. Jackie? Ness? What are you two doing out at such a late hour? she asked as she opened the door wider.
We have a problem, Millie, Jackie said softly as she and Ness walked in. Millies attention was immediately drawn to the baby. Is something wrong with Skylyn?
Its not her. Do you remember that job Ness tried to get?
Yes.
Well, they contacted us again and said that the job was open- the person whod had the position previously quit. The catch is that we have to leave the spaceport. Wed be going to Yssaire, and we might move around a lot after.
Then whats the problem?
Skylyn cant be brought up in that kind of environment. You know about Yssaire- its the capital of the empire. And if we uproot her over and over, what kind of a life is that?
So youre leaving her with me, Millie inferred.
If you will accept, Jackie said, almost pleadingly. Please, Millie. She may only be a year old, but she recognizes you, I know. And you know her. Youre the best person. We dont want to have to leave her in an orphanage.
Calm yourself. Of course I will take the child. I can never be any kind of mother to her, but I can be more of an
aunt. Or grandmother. Something like that, I suppose. Millie took the child from her mother. Jackie looked painfully at her daughter, tears filling her eyes. Ness looked at her, silently asking if she wanted to say goodbye. Jackie shook her head. Saying goodbye will make it even harder to let go, she whispered brokenly. Ness hugged her around the shoulders with one arm, and led her out.
Jackie?
She turned around to face Millie.
Shes going to look like you. I can tell.
Jackie smiled, then walked away with her husband into the dark.














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And this is cool! Great start! I want to read more! Is there more? I'll keep looking...
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Hiding in Plain Sight- The story of a girl trying to pass herself off as a cabin boy. Unfortunately, the first mate James Hawkins has been assigned to keep an eye on her...
I'm looking forward to the next chapters!
but it's still heavy, that they leave their child alone...
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Also, I had this extension of the Treasure Planet plotline running around in my head. So here it is:
When Skye's nineteen, she's engaged to Jim when her parents come and take her away. However, Skye's mother (Jackie) sees how upset Skye is, feels bad and secretly sends Skye back home, and after that Skye always stays in contact and has a good relationship with her mom.
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